Unaware College Succubus 2 2024.9.12

An erotic adult novel featuring a 22-year-old inexperiencedwoman in her third year of college fully turned into a succubus, with the twist that she herself doesn't know what is going on.

But we do and we get to come along on her seven day journey of annoyinglust.

Annoying because Anne doesn't want to be involved with the world of sex.

Yet her body constantly tells her itdoes. It really fucking does.

The corruption goes hard in part 2.

Pros

Easy to read.You don't need to read the original, important story beats get small recaps.Adult content comes fast; Every scene is pretty much a setup for the next. I learned a lot from part one.Nothing dark or evil.

Cons

Art is only stomachable... Is that a word? During actual scenes. The pacing is pretty breakneck during the first two days.There's a sad bit in the middle that just comes from nowhere and is just agut punch. But a milder word. Does anyone have a synonym for gut punch that is milder? A gut pat?There's a gut pat in this story? Is that even a con?

Themes Included in order ofappearance, so small spoiler warning.

I use mild when it's only a few sentences.

I use a question mark when I don't know.

CorruptionHypnosis?Female submission Mild Male Domination Paizuri/breast sexoralSex Toys Male Chastity RomanceFemale Masturbation Anal Mild Forced Transformation Female Chastity Shared Sense Exhibitionism?Pain Drugs? FingeringUnconscious HandjobSperm Eating Lesbian Choking Cunnilingus Edging Succubus Bondage SexSome sperm on some food again, I think this one is funny because I don't think anyone wants this, except the main character.Mild pregnancy? It's the food; It gave me an excuse to draw Anne looking pregnant. You know what I'm gonna put the picture on the right so you don't even need to download the novel to see the 'pregnancy' because that tag is just a scam.Female Domination Mild Male SubmissionForced blowjobFootjobThere's a boob getting stepped on, what tag is that?Toy Under Clothes Womb TattooSpanking HumiliationMild Vore... It's like the pregnancy, a thing happens allowing me to draw it. Not gonna post that picture though, it's too much of a fun surprise.Mild Bimbofication?Sex Work!

Now all of that stuff has written and drawn scenes and as you can tell by the pictures on the right it is just as impressive as it sounds.

Featuring about 50K words and about 50 digitally drawn images. And not a single help from any AI.

My favorite part this time is the tail reveal scene. The tail comes out andconstantly just starts to display Anne's feelings and it's so cute! It just starts wagging when someone mentions sperm for instance. And then itcovers her face when she blushes and it's all so cute!

Also a bonus:This work right here includes the strongest opening line in narrative history. Even if you're not interested in any of those tags up there, I recommend stilldownloading to justread that first sentence.

Call me Ismael? Bland... In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit? Meh stuff.... I'm breaking the rule of thirds but I haven't read a third book to reference...

My opener on the other hand, groundbreaking!

I'm Joking by the way. This story is just some funeasy to read porn and I hold no illusion that it is anything else. I am however proud of how it is constructed this time. Every scene has set up, every character motivation has a cause and I tried really hard to still keep up the realism.

Credits:

Written in Notepad... By me ATinyLittleCloud.

Drawn in The Free Drawing softwareKrita.

Spell checked with google documents.

Combined in the excellent for this sort of thing, RenPy Game Engine.

Updated to 3.03 as I

+1 ran a spellcheck.

+1 rewrote the Eve spanking scene to be less first drafty.

+1 added one piece of art to the ending.

-1 Tried to fix the more awkward sentencing but I failed. Sometimes I stare at grammar rules and I just feel my brain dying its actually really scary.

Updated to 3.04 as I

am still fiddling with spelling and grammar.